Тема: Does this intro paragraph for an essay sound good?

Coming up with an effective title can end up being the most difficult part of your essay. A catchy title can make your paper stand out from the pile and give your reader a sense of the content, slant, and perspective of your essay. To craft a strong title, you need to focus on the three elements of a standard title: the hook, the key terms, and the source or location. This structure applies specifically to academic essays, but you can also apply this structure to narrative essays.

The Only Think Happening Here Me Being Traumatized (when capitalizing, u dont need to capitalize of, an, the, and or) but in this case, the is the first word. Thats y its capitalized.